A poetic interlude
One second you're light
The next its all tight
The pressure amounts
It wont give an ounce
You wonder if ever
you'll shed that tether
for good.
I needed an update. Tommorow people. I need short ventings.
The next its all tight
The pressure amounts
It wont give an ounce
You wonder if ever
you'll shed that tether
for good.
I needed an update. Tommorow people. I need short ventings.
9 Comments:
Excellent. I didn't know you did the poetry thing. :)
I dont do the poetry thing. In 35 seconds I rhyme inane thoughts together. The people act nice bc im so hot.
you wanted to know what i deleted from mine... it was my "rhyming thing" except it went to the tune of 'on top of oldsmokey/spaghetti'...
Bravo, bravo! Is this your first poem on your blog? Good work.
Cellar-d: It must be very tough being so hot
Stam: I see you have found my cuz. - Soo... you are blogger, ay?
Its all in the genes, dude.
artistic expression! So this is your release..
Good inane rhyming thoughts CD. I liked it.
lost: Yes the blog is a release, not the poems though.
aviva: thanks i guess
liberal girl who voted for the dems thats why they are in control: Yes its better then nothing.
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